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PostSubject: Ben the Froakie   Thu Nov 27, 2014 10:02 am


Name: Ben
Species: #656, Froakie, The Bubble Frog Pokemon
Gender: Male

Level: 8
Ability: Torrent
Moveset:
-Pound (Level 1)
-Bubble (Level 5)
-Quick Attack (Level 8)
-Water Pulse (Tutor Move)

Appearance: For the most part, Ben looks like a normal Froakie.  His few differences include his blue skin is a bit darker than most of his kind, and he has smaller eyes.  He also has a scar on his back from when a rock had been thrown at him from behind.
Personality: Ben was a very shy Pokemon, but as he got older, he started to come out of his shell.  He is still shy, but not as shy as he was.  He is very kind, and, if he tries, he could make many friends.  Even though he is very polite, if you anger him to a certain point, he would go crazy.  He started to overcome his behavior, but it still causes problems every once in a while.  But there is one good thing that came from this, he is more alert than other Pokemon.
History: Ben was born in the Ribati region, near the river in Route One.  Ben's childhood had been fairly normal.  His parents had stayed together since they first met.  His dad always said it was love at first sight, but his mom said it took a while for his dad to win her heart.  He had two older brothers, one younger brother, and two younger sisters.  He and his oldest brother, Dan, were the best of friends.  Dan would always comfort Ben when he was down, and protected him from the bullies in the forest he lived in.  His younger siblings were always nice to Ben, but teased him lightly, knowing it would set him off if they did it to much.  But his second oldest brother always hid himself away, being rarely seen.  Ben knew very little about him, only his name, Greg, and he was older than Ben.  Greg was the one who had given Ben his scar on his back after they had argued.  Ben, being the bigger Pokemon, left the scene, and got hit in his back by a rock.  His mom had fixed it up as best as she could, but there would always be the scar.  He had decided to leave his home after that, and would come back once he had become stronger, his scar reminding him he can't give up, not when he had to prove himself. He had left from his home, against his parent's wishes, and had found himself to get to Route Two during his travels. On his adventures, many Humans had tried to catch him, but he was able to run away from them almost all of them. The ones he couldn't run away from, he had just defeated their Pokemon. During his travels, he had found out he was much smarter than most other wild Pokemon. He could understand human speech, while others could not. That's about it with his history up until now.

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PostSubject: Re: Ben the Froakie   Thu Nov 27, 2014 10:49 am

Your history seems like its more about describing his family than his actual history. How did he get to the region? Was he born here, and if so where? Has he had any interaction with humans? Where is his starting point?
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PostSubject: Re: Ben the Froakie   Thu Nov 27, 2014 12:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Ben the Froakie   Thu Nov 27, 2014 12:49 pm

Your character seems to be borderline sue with defeating everybody and running away from everybody, along with assuming that he would make many friends. Just be careful about him and you'll be fine though.

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